13/09/10 What's Going on in BD Class?

We started the day off with some tricky weekend reporting. Instead of writing about what we have done (1st person), we pretended to be reporters and had a go at writing about our weekends in the 3rd person. We had to make some changes to the way we write.

We started off by writing in the first person. When we had finished we circled all the the words like: I, me, we, us, my etc and replaced them with, he, she, them, their, us etc. It was a bit tricky but we were getting it by the end.